Nice groove at the beginning. Cool strings arrangement on the keyboard. Vocals remind me of Robert Smith or David Bowie. There is a little bit of peaking going on with the vocals. Turned my speakers down and it seems to have gone away. Oops there it is again. I wouldn't worry too much, though. It's still a good song. It seems shorter than four minutes. Good sign. Only constructive criticism I have is to not record your vocals so hot. That's it. Good song!