Become A Display (KING LIV MIX+MASTER)

Seren Skies

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Sonson Review

I absolutely love your music but the one that droid out to me more was become a display. I love your concept on how you paint this picture of how some people might be a display and never know it. I really enjoyed it. Thank you, Sonson

United States, Florida, Orlando

Brilliant

Hi there - I absolutely love this song, and the vocals are giving a great enhancement to the melody. I have been in the business for many years and it is so refreshing to hear a singer who can be listened to with pleasant enjoyment rather than being blasted out with volume! Maybe you could ask your engineer to bring your vocals a little more to the fore because your voice should be the real prominence. Thank you for a pleasant experience - really loved listening. Kind regards, Johnny Ramone :-)

United Kingdom, EXETER

Seren Skies - Become A Display

Seren Skies - Become A Display is a soft, gentle and touching song about being under the scrutiny of others. It's not always a pleasurable experience to have your life examined critically. As tough and uncomfortable as it is, it's a part of life that you can't escape. We must all learn how to deal with it. We got to accept ourselves fully and stand proud on display for all to she. I believe that's the essence of what Seren is singing about in this wonderful song. Keep up the good work, Seren.

United States, California, Oakland

Paradox

I wasn't quite sure of what I was going to get. The music indicators were saying...rock, alternative, etc. I thought it was much more to the pop sound. The structure was well done. The paradox was that it was much better than what I thought that I was going to hear. The beat was good. This song could have been played on a disco floor at the end of the gig as things were winding down for the night. Vocals were nice and smooth and pleasant to the ear. The structure of the song worked as well. I like the feel with the keyboard, I believe is what you were using in the background. I feel like I just got wound down for the night. Mission accomplished and good work.

United States, California, San Diego

Great Radio Song

This song has a sort of late sixties feel and is a good bet for radio play in Australia and world-easy going beats and nice Vocals with soft driving guitars. Yes all round I like this song" Become A Display" by Seren Skies the more you play it the more it grows on you.

nice

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love the voice. very soothing and talented.the tone is also perfect and wisely chose. that melody is nice. your chorus could probably need some work. maybe its because the dubs or sound on the two voices are a little off or maybe they the tones are off by mistake or purpose but it doesn't sound right. anyways very wonderful verses and very wonderful words spoken in those verses.

United States, Idaho, Boise

Proudly on Display

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This is the second song I've heard from Seren. The song starts fast, as do the vocals. What I like about Seren's voice is that it's soothing and smooth. The music on this choice, sounds like another TV soundtrack or inclusion on a movie. While the electronic sound is a bit retro for contemporary radio, it's a nice little tune. I'd almost like to hear this song with an orchestral arrangement.

United States, California, Huntington Beach

Become A Display

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wow what a very well produced song, nice piece, it it sung quite well and it suits the song, as the song suits your voice, well done, i imagine you would have a lot of fans on NM1, thanks for letting me hear this song, and keep it up cheers Mel

Australia, Melbourne

Very Nice

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Hi, I sat down with my eyes close listening to this amazing soft rock I have to tell you I was blown away with sound, writing and the energy you've put into this record. Keep up the good work wish you best of all with your music.

United States, New Jersey, Union

A&R review

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Hello, we are reviewing your song and we like the direction, melody ,and arrangements. However we think you should focus more on vocal arrangements and find your sound to make it more industry ready. The production can be more in tune with the vocals meaning the Producer and the artists must have a great chemistry in our experience in the music biz., also take that song and own it , promote it once done over.. Your target market you hit this song with could be huge,and later other states will pick up on it..feel free to email us for guidance and consulting.. Happy New Year

Anthemic Pop

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Enjoyable pop anthem. Cool clear vocals with a positive message. A decent melody, and an upbeat chorus. Possible overuse of the mechanical drum fill. Better days ahead I feel.

United States, New York, New York

Seren Skies

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Nice groove. The tune definitely moving and has a lot of energy and is well presented. The verses have a really laid back feel and are well articulated. This is a smooth track and everything is very tasteful with overall good audio quality and content. The lead vocals carry the song with a strong supporting cast. Kudos to the author as this is a very nice arrangement. Congratulations to all on a job well done.

United States, Illinois, Chicago

HMMMMMMMMMM......

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Well I found this song to be entry level material...It almost sounds like Karaoke music as if you are just reading along with almost a mono tone melody. The recording quality also hurts any song so hopefully you can record better sonically? Song writing is an art...there are many different forms of art as we all know...art can also be selective. What I do not wish to convey is my review is based on selectivity but what my ears tell me you are new to song writing. From a professional standpoint I always try and find where a song would fit best regardless....but this song is not rock... or pop...it's like an adult something. All I can say is keep at it...learn to really use your voice and don't be afraid to put it out there when you sing it's all important. You have to really grab the listener by the end of the first chorus or you have lost all interest. So try and keep that in mind to create and build up the song. A great song has to have a great hook melody....this song doesn't have it and partly because of the chord structure and instrumentation behind it is also weak. So I don't know if you play an instrument but I suggest you see if you can find someone to collaborate with who has stronger performance skills. All of this will in the end help you to become a better artist and better the craft of songwriting (which we all strive to be better). All the best Seren Skies

Become a display

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Personally I don't like the music really, for me it's to soft and to lovely. You do a good job but I want to be honest, the other song of you I loved much more than this

Switzerland, Aarau

Excellent track

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This song is a very nicely arranged Pop track. Vocals are excellent and the content is uplifting. The backing instrumentation is also well done and has a very nice light feel.

United States, California, L.A.

memorys

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every time I review you music it takes me back when I was a little kid sitting in a room on a dresser watching VH1 and MTV your style is just what help me like all types of my from twisted sister to Stevie Nicks Boy George keep at it you will get your shot of life never give up on a good thang that should be your next song title peace. CaNy Entertainment

United States, California, pasadena

Seren Skies Review

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love the chorus and concept of the song. Nice warm sound vocals are even but you should give more fire into recording it a little more passion in the singing but overall it was good... work!

United States, Arkansas, Camden

Idk...

Not really my kind of music although it had a repetitive catchy melody to it. I appreciate all kinds of music so I will listen again in a non-bias sense, more from a musical standpoint.

United States, Virginia, Newport News

Be a risk taker

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this song reminds me of some back in the day Beegee's song. groovy as they would say, Vocal wise you have a strong voice and I can hearin your voice like you wonna belt-out some high vocal range, I would suggest to try taking more risk and explore more, I feel like your playing it safe But this is a good job, keep up the good work

United States, New York, Brooklyn

become a display

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The guitar being played is very exciting. And the energy of the song as well makes everything feel Hopeful. Keep this up ! Idk how would you feel about this but it gives me that late 80s "culture club" vibe I love this keep going keep going!

United States, New Jersey

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