RastaBurna / Can I Ball / Da Bubble

Not bad

It's old school so it is what it is. Not like it's a bad song but probably not your best song. Keep plucking away at it Tho. You will make some great suffering eventually.

Bo Boy Burner - Da Bubble

Honestly you got a decent idea however you haven't manifested it funky enough. That "I got my mind right lemme touch you" makes da hook wack cause you ain't spittin' it right. Perhaps let someone else do it. Its not a wack idea its just wack execution on yo part. The music is cool tho, it sets da scene right for some real stuff to be said its just no disrespect, you not sayin' nuttin' Do ya vocals over really project em so we can feel em. We know you can feel it. Now you just gotta make us feel it.

DIRTY SOUTH

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Good....

Ayo! I slick see potential in this one. It's not a banger off rip, but it can be one. If it was recorded more recently as opposed to when you wrote it, then I would've expected it to be more polished than this. Tho I admire the simplicity, the I couldn't get a good feel for it up until the second verse where you got to flowing it together better. If it was freestyled, 4 stars all day! And I'm not the one to knick-pick on equalizers and other mastery based things. You kept it simple, and that's what I respect the most. Keep the grind strong. SkullMane
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Forgotten style

I righteously enjoy the style. It puts me in the mind of Louisiana meets Brooklyn. I don't know how many people can pull that off, but BoBoy pulled it off with this one. The track is smooth. I normally like a lot of 808 in songs, but I think this track is perfect for this style. Lyrically BoBoy is nice. He shows you where comes from and tells you where he is trying to go. If he keeps it up he could definitely open a new lane for what I like to call the "new ol' school"
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My honest opinion Only

solid beat. Bars are kinda lacking tho, I was able finish some of your lines. The best carries this whole song which ain't the worse thing cause you got that. As a listener I need some more original punchlines. Not saying the song was bad but everyone is always for new fresh lines and styles and her me it was just little basic. Keep working and moving forward.

TaLaFa

Yo! keep it dirty
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I am feeling your message

I like the fact that i can keep up with your message, and your vocabulary is understanding. Unlike the new people in the industry i can't make out what they are saying. if your alone were synced then out would come out even better. keep it up bro.
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"Da Bubble" Review

One of my favorite instrumentals from the 90's (X to tha Z ~~ Paparazzi) nice pick... Sound quality for this track is OK, but definitely could be stronger with better mixing (and maybe a few more adlibs). The concept is a bit weak & the hook should flow with the beat a bit better. Solid mixtape track, but with a little more work & a few tweaks to the hook you could have a nice album filler.!. Stay focused & keep doin' your thing.!!
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Chord Progression

Good stuff my man. Keep practicing your craft cause there's always room for real. If you gone do singing rap stretch out the words. You don't really have to say as much when you're doing singing rap. You're giving a message (which is what rap is really all about) so when you say something you want them to remember pause and let the delay sit for a bit. Watch you chord progression, be sure to go with the keys of the music when your doing your hooks. With a rap like that you want impact. On the next one shorten your last word instead of holding it...bubble------ thats a hold. bubble. and let the delay do the rest. Real rap don't need to be commercialized...your words are above the "trend" so you don't have to conform the their delivery tactics. Keep it coming like this fam...and you will never be forgotten!
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Damn Awsum!

My Broda, it'z song cool as alwayz! U made fine stuff! I like dis instrumental!
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Excellent! Right amountof instrumentation ad knowledge droppin lyrics. Reminds me of Que Sera Sera fro m way back....

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props to the artist

wht's up homie as always we all have room to grow i think you have a good concept and the word play is strong however the delivery could be tighter keep in mind for you just practice lay your vocals then go back a few days later and listen to the track again. my dude again great concept it's the right track it works with your voice overall i give your work 4 stars
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Interesting flow

One of the things I noticed especially those that are Dirty South, they always start like a orchestra. That is good at sometimes, but not all the time. I do like the lyrics and do like the fact that they kept it in like a story form so that people can try to put together that he is attempting to portray. I like the production and I like the arrangement. There is room for improvement, but I can easily see this song making an impact in the industry.
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Knuckles

Hey how you doing? The sounds great
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