O-NYX / Dead or Alive (2018) / Don't go away (2018 - 1st Album - Dead or Alive)

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Excellent piece of Californian rock! Like the beat, like the groove, like the well done Rythmic. Your melody line is strange enough to keep us interested and surprised trying to guess what will be the next note. Excellent. One critic may be, something in the mix is not working ell enough and can be improved to give more depth to the excellent vocals. Try to hear a song oof Daughtry and you will capt immediately how the mix can enhance a vocal depth. Then this song will be exceptional. Because all the components are very well done. Bravo.

Topixx review

Cool song, I think the vocals are nice and fit the music well. I feel like this track just needs a little more production and it would be a hit. One of the best tracks I have heard on this site. Only thing I could say other than that is maybe tweak the arrangement slightly for better radio play. But seriously nice rock track!

Not a Wimpy Ballad.from this Band

Here's what I like about this ballad. The repetitive riff eight notes intertwining with the pleading vocals and drums in the verses. Then subtle power chords in the chorus. Then a not too long guitar oriented break. The production never overwhelms the song. Keeping it relatively simple here, works for me. This song is above the average; these guys are pros. I'm guessing a live version would be even sharper.


You must re write beginning of this song..or drop It..good part starts after 1 min mark..trust me no Music publisher will take That Much Time to listen all You got is max 10 sec to "Catch" The Ear..and is too long for a Radio Play ( they using less than 4 min so the best way is to re record It and after work is done send It out.. is good as It is for a Life Concerts but not so for Music Bizz..I wish You good luck with Pitching.. I like some parts of It.. Good Job..

Bonito tema!!!

Buenas tardes desde Jerez de la Frontera, me alegro de escuchar tu canción porque entra dentro de mis gustos musicales. Buenos arreglos al final de la canción y una línea suave pero enérgica en todo el tema, felicidades!!!! Por otra parte, he echado de menos algunos cambios, sobre todo en los primeros minutos, más que nada por romper un poco la monotonía tonal, aunque reconozco que soy amante del rock progresivo, y eso puede influenciarme negativamente...en cualquier caso, el tema es estupendo. Un saludo!!!
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