If you leaveCool rhythm guitar and drums sounds a lot like incubus and stained. I like this very much and I’m a fan now.i love this and I think it’s gold but if I had to give one constructive critism I would say you could improve your lyrics with a hook or a revelation that would just add to the gold that this song is. Maybe talk about the joy of life before you offer her to leave you. Or the mediocrity that was before you offer her to leave. I’m impressed and I love to review really great artists! Thankyou peace and prosperity!!
Awesome Track!!!I wanted to write this review today once i listened to this great track..You have successfully achieved getting a very special rock sound and feel..I get a hint of a flavor of Pearl Jam in your sounds which is fantastic and works at making your music a classic to be listened to again and again!!
If you leave me nowI like this band. They have some great songs. All different and unique in style and execution. The band is tight, and experienced in how to present their material in a professional manner. Well done! Arrangement: This is a good arrangement as far as the execution of each part. What I'm not quite certain about is the constant and consistant guitar arpeggio's thoughout the whole song. If I may make a small suggestion? Use the arpeggio styling in the intro; during the first verse, hold back with less arpeggio and use a more "Teaser" approach with just a small amount of guitar in the first two beats at the beginning of the first verse. Slowly apply a bit more during the 2nd verse. When you get to the chorus, play the guitar part with more power chords or something similar, again, building the part up to where the break into the instrumental begins; Here is where the lead guitar really flies! Nicely done. I'm not sure but it sounds like there is a bit of chorus effect on the lead? perhaps you can also add a second guitar lead to play a counter melody during that break? Vocals: Very well done! Very clear, and easily understood. Lyrics: Well done! I can clearly hear each word. The lyrics are not at muddy or disjointed. Mix: Kudos to the mix! Each track is well balanced and crystal clear. Just as it should be. Well done! I look forward to hearing more great songs from this band! Donivan.
Nice track by O-NYXGreat track by O-NYX. Pure rock with a great solo. The vocals are very good and catchy . This band seems to come from France but the pronoounciation doesnt tell (which is not always te case with french bands) , great job by O-NYX
Very catchyWell, what can I say? Yet another great offering from O-NYX from France. "If you leave me now" is a very thought provoking track. I particularly like the bass groove with the effect on the guitar during the verse. Vocals are strong and the song is overall very tight and well produced. This has to be a contender for being a single for O-NYX, it is has a nice commercial feel to it that would easily suit radio play. A nice chorus provides a good hook too. Very Catchy.
AtmosphericLike that heavy bass line, hooks you in straightaway and the chiming guitar line is pretty cool too. Didn’t like the chorus though, a bit too pop sounding. Could have got heavier rather than getting lighter
Don't leave me now!I am a fan of all genres of music. as long as it's good...this song has a psuedo- 80's vibe to it which I like and the lyrics are good with it's message...ONY-X has a great sound and I applaud them! KUDOS
This song has all it needs...This is one more of the O-NYX songs I'll review... and as always I can rely on the good quality of production, performance and song writing. Very nice and smooth melodies and harmonies. I like the voice very much, and each sound of each instrument is fitting well to the good mix. This song has all it needs to be air played and sure rocks on a live performance. Well done one of the professionals here!
Ha! les cotes d'armor...Bon, ça fait un moment que je vous connait, pour avoir vécu 6 ans entre Uzel et Plemet. En fait c'est surtout par les amis que j'ai gardé sur place. Une sacrée belle surprise en tous cas. Si vous passez dans la région Brestoise faites nous signe. On est pas mal à apprécier votre musique ici. Pour notre par on sort d'un enregistrement studio (studio pavillon K des Merzhin). en attendant, bonne continuation.
O-NYX ROCKSSo, starts off with a guitar lick...I thought a little loose but good...but then it tightens up into a good classic rock groove. Kind of 90s to me. Good players, tight parts. A synthesis of classic themes done well. The vocals could have been a bit louder but preety good. The hook was a memorable and goes through your head when it's over.
Good soundsRight off I liked the bass tone and that it's up in the mix. Good drum sound too. Good harmony on the chorus. Production very good. Mix and EQ on instruments all good. I liked to guitar solo too.I like the song, especially the chorus. Great effort all around.
super songI am not a review writer but this is super nice track with fantasy and ideas, also rhythm, as well as nice bass link, good guitar solo, sound and mix is very good done, it seems to be cool professional song, singing siting well in the arrangements and sounds good, I like this.
I like the singer's voiceThis sounds like a singer with processed music behind him. I like the deep vocals but the energy just misses for me. Not quite enough dynamics there in the music to make it interesting. The song is structured OK but the chorus is just not catching my interest. Reminds me of Staind knockoff band that just doesn;t quite make the grade
IF YOU LEAVE ME NOWINTERESTING SONG TITLE YOU SHARE THE SAME SONG TITLE WITH CHICAGO'S 70'S MEGA BALLAD HAVING SAID THAT THERE IS GOOD PRODUCTION VALUES HERE WITH ALL KINDS OF INFLUENCES CREEPING THROUGH INTO THIS SONG THE STRONGEST INFLUENCE HERE IS CANADIAN ROCKERS NICKELBACK COULD BE THE LOST TRACK THEY NEVER RELEASED FOR A FRENCH ROCK OUTFIT YOU CERTAINLY WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO DETECT ANY OF THE CULTURAL ISSUES FOR FRANCE WOULD BE RIGHT AT HOME IN LA
CoolI like this you have a good Voice. The only thing is whoever produces your music needs to tune your voice with the rest of the music. Your voice seems a bit distant from the rest of the music and I feel it would be better with slightly better production.