The intro was good and the music was good, but your vocal isn't telling the story. Listen I am acappella christain singer I don't know where you in Jesus but the tittle will make you sing on the mountain top put some fire in your voice share it with the lost souls. Do you believe in the holy ghost ask the Lord to anoint your voice so when ever people hear your music every body every where will stop and listen. Keep praying and keep singing, May God Bless you. St. Louis, Mo.