Stick to what YOU do. You are so not a rapper. Track needs to be rerecorded and the mix is horrible. It may be a great song, but one cannot tell from this recording. It has a serious High School Garage Band vibe.

Great job,interesting dynamics.The interaction of the vocals in harmony and with the instrumentation seems to blend almost a rappy tone with arena type rock in a nice transition.The actual lyrics are obscured in places,which makes the complete message incomplete,although not lost entirely.Obviously very talented Dynamite Daniel.

many things to correct before listening..improve youtr mixing skills!

The concept is spot on. I would add a shadowing harmony track to mask the pitchy vocals. More breath support my man!

not my kind of music

Nice music keep it coming