HiI do Think that this is a Nice Instrumental..but It do NOT need the 'Samba Vocal".. also that Drum Machine is way to much..so if I be You.. I will re record It.. put the drum in the background .. take out the vocal.. make good Recording Quality.. and who know what will happen.. if You will send It as It Is.. I think that Music Publishers and Radio Stations will pass on It.. but is not important what I'm thinking.. send It out and see what will happen..
HelloO Boy.. This is very nice Melody..Please put that Drum Machine in to the back and that that vocal out also..just keep the Instrumental part..and try to make ( on Computer)a little better quality..I really think this will be a Good Instrumental tune for Dance .I do hope that You will do that.. I wish You all The Best with submissions..20 years ( or so ) that will beok but in Today Music World ..Publishers and Radios looking for a Final Recording not just a Demo..Good Job..
HiI like Your Melodies but the problem is that in order to be Publish has to be a Total Production Top Level..Melodies alone will not do the job..so try to compose less and focus More on Arrangement and Recording Quality..I do hope that one day You will take some of advise.. any how is not up to me to say is good or bad THEY MUST LOVE IT in order to take It to publication..so try to make better recordings.. I wish You Good Luck I wish You all the best..