HiSeem like You are trying to make some Meditation Music..any how.. I think is a good Idea to take out the Intro with Birds..just go the Melody..which is nice but again need a Good Studio Recording in order to get ANY Chance to be hear by Music Publishers or Radio DJ..Try to make an One Radio Ready Recording and try to send It out One Great isMuch Betterthan many not so good..I wish You goodluck keep up good work
HiThis sound like a Folk Tune .. easy Happy Melody good to sing at dinner table..hey put some funny Lyric in to and You will have a Nice song to sing with Friends..as Music Publishing goes.. You need to make a Great Arrangement in order to catch Theirs Ear..Instrumental Music almost Never is taking by Music Publishers .. I do hope that You will found a way to make a Bigger Production and send It It.. I do like It..but They must Love It..Good Job..
Faraway FeelThe bird chattering sets a faraway feel for artemisioeloredana’s “Magical Lagoon”. The strong and unforgettable melody line comes in right away and there is no doubt of the message, joy and happiness. The chorus offers a very pleasant chord change and a chance to get a breather from all the newfound fun. Then it’s back into action with dynamics steering toward the (clean as a whistle) ending. But unlike vacations, it doesn’t have to end. Halleluiah, you can listen to “Magical Lagoon” as many times as you want. Thanks for your music artemisioeloredana.
HiThis is very nice Melody all You need is to make a Bigger..Better Arrangement..and after all is done I'm sure will be ready to play life in up end Establishments..as You know Instrumental Music is very hard to pitch to Music Publishers or Radio Stations. so Please work on It because You have a Nice Peaceful Melody and when Production will be better many people will like It...as It is now is not ready for a Radio Play..I wish You best of luck with submissions...Good Job..