HiYou are writing nice Melodies..I Must say this is one of Your Best Songs..but..Try take in the back that Drum Machine..or use a Real Drummer..I Like the vocal part but The Quality of Recording is not so great..if I be You I will Re Record That song..any how..this is just My Opinion ..so send It out and Let's see what Music Insiders will say who knows for what They are Looking for at this Moment.. I Like This song.. specially the Vocal Part.. a Lot of Energy and Passion..
HiThis is a Nice tune..brings back memory of The 60"s..at That Time Italian Pop Songs was very Popular in Europe..at this point is not important what I think or like .. The Key to Success are in The Hands of Music Publishers and Radio DJ..I do hope that still some radio which play old songs..so send thissong to them and let see what will happen..I do hope that someone will use this song..I wish You good luck with pitching..
HiI got a feeling that this tune will sound better as a Instrumental only..with some nice arrangement as a Song need some re writing to do and a better vocal..is also a little to long.. remember that Radio Stations and Music Publishers prefer around 3.5 max.which is very easy to do.. just cut some instrumentals parts..what I'm trying to say it is a chance that This will be a good song but some work Must be done specially on The Vocal part.. if You send It out like It is..I think They will agree with me..I wish You good luck