First, I want to start by saying I listen to actual lyrics. Both of you guy's lyrical content was very deep and i felt where u were coming from. The first verse was off beat alot though.. I feel like u shouldve rapped slower n possibly take out some of the extra words so u could stay with the rhythm. The mixing and mastering also makes it harder for people to want to listen because its not really that good. I feel like u guys need background vocals and harmonies. The way u guys rapped the verses i could tell u would know exactly how to critique your craft. But like i said before I really like the lyrics! Keep pushing u can only get better! Nice job

That 2nd verse made the song. The delivery of the verse brought the song to life. The book was decent. Still it went with the song. Not too stuck on the first verse tho. Overall it's an ok track.

nice message good production really the hook could of had a better melody but the flows are good y'all fit will with the track nice eerie piano good track fellas everything is good better harmonize of the hook would of made the song stand out more though

hey dude, good lyrich but slow down and match the track. when your rapping you are spittin too fast for the track. the second dude is doing alright the first guy needs to listen to the second guy, and and learn to pace with this track.

Good job with the music man I really like to hear different stuff. And thus here proves you are in the right direction. Keep pushing man you will succeed. Also like to say it sounds like you put in solid work

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I can listen but sounds like sh*t after 10secs only because sounds like everybody else that wants to be a "story teller" .... f**k out of here lol stick to your day job or hit the people with a come back that'll speak more than just simple "lyrics"

love the world play and the fact you keep it authentic and thats whats special about your music and you need to understand that what i think is just one person so at the end of the day if its your dream and you believe in what you do then do it to the fullest and dont look back at all its easier said then done trust me i know im still going thru it but its life thats all enjoyed your music

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I dig the new style of flow of the first verse but sometime you drag on the beat. I feel like if you slowed things down a little bit, you would have better results on your delivery. The Hook is cool, not exactly my cup of tea but there is definitely a lane for that. keep it poppin my dude. The other verses are solid. overall its a decent song. Keep it poppin my dude.

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I just moved to Denver about 5 months ago and your cover art for the song is what first caught my attention. After listening to the song, you're pretty good man. You've got the flow, lyrics and a beat that doesn't over power and allow you to get the message across. Great work man, thanks for the sharing with us! -MK

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I have the black eye peas sound in my head from the start is the beat sampled from that. The flow doesnt really match the beat. It sounds like the first person is just rapping their not on the beat at all.

the first verse was ok but could use some improvement...practice more to find your rhythm and feel more comfortable with the flow.. sort of choppy and off beat in a few areas...the chorus really took away from the vibe with poor harmonizing... although it does fit the topic of this track.. the second verse was fire and that guy should have been on the first also.. that is how you should sound over a beat like this... be able to keep up a fast tempo but remain on beat and with a good rhythm.. so my vote is mostly for the second verse.. although i give some extra credit for having some substance on the rest..im going to go ahead and give this a slightly higher vote than i should.. constructive criticism

Très bonne prestation, la ligne mélodique nous met dans l'ambiance ainsi que ce jolie phrasé, la rythmique est bonne le kick frappe bien, et les harmonie sont en accord avec la mélodie. C'est du bon boulot!

I like the instrumental in the song.I think you should slow the lyrics down a bit but overall its sounds good. You sound like eminem a lil bit but keep grinding with your craft. I wouldn't mind listening to it again.

Piano intro was dope the tech 9 style of rapid fire rapping is tough the second Mc had the style mastered the first Mc should of rehearsed more before you guys layed the track. On the hook find a rock singer to go edgy on the hook sometimes when we write hooks with not a lot of words or melody it puts a spotlight on the singer as far as hitting each note and run because there's nothing else going on in the track right then so you have to nail it. The song is a good song just go back in and tighten it up and you my have a crossover hit....Curt B

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