papers and pages Sounds like a rough demo. Some good Ideas. It could sound good rerecorded and electrified with a metal band backing. Some very good guitar playing and it has some potential but as it stands I wouldnt choose to listen to it. Also the structure needs improving. its an awkward structure. VS Chorus bridge Solo Chorus outro? That´s not a formula you would often see succeeding in popular music. tryu Vs Chorus Vs Chorus bridge Chorus outro
