WordThis track is the truth, I love hip-hop in its true form that keeps your head rocking, the beat is slamming, the hook takes you back to a day when life was grounded, when less is more that works !!!
LOVE ITLove this keep up the good work. Hard Work Pays Off And Never Give UP, some people will not see your vision, put God first. Stay consitant and never lose faith, always remember to have a lawyer just in case you can not understand what the contract is
Pretty coolPretty cool, I think it is pretty good work. I hope you can cope with it. I think the instrumental was awesome. I think the drums and horns bring some excitement to the song. It made the emotion of the song more intense. I like the lyrical alliteration of the second verse. I guess you can kill them the Jamaican way. I haven’t been to a Jamaican city in a very long time. I think you could use a little more work with the timing and your delivery in certain places but I gave it a 3.5, good job
Hope this helpsFor starters your hook is very basic and out of the gate that is a deterrent to continue on with your song. Lyrically there are some really great bars in your versus however this is not a song destined for greatness. I would strongly recommend the revision of the hug I would also recommend that you may be pulled back from the metaphors and focus on accomplishing with the chorus has set up as the premise of your song. I hope this is helpful, I am not the person that is pretty into affect what I am asking you to put into a fact so I hope that you do not judge me for that fact but I listen to your music and I hear what could be good and I hope that by making some minor adjustments that goodness or even greatness could be accomplished. You have a very New York style of flowSo if you are a New Yorker and I applaud you for that maybe six something a little more original and future songs that flow content to be a little over used by New York rappers but at the same time it could just be your natural flow growing up in New York that that may be something that can’t be helped which is fine.
NIce soundI like that beat, real smooth. Good track with some nice lyrics. I like the your sound. Its defiantly al ot of trash out here, but this track aint that. keep up the work, send me a link to your videos, lets net work..be blessed
NiceNice First of all the beat is hot and the intro is very invitational. The hook is catchy and nice, and the lyrics are pretty good. Overall I see greatness in this song. It has potential to top the charts. Keep it up! First of all the beat is hot and the intro is very invitational. The hook is catchy and nice, and the lyrics are pretty good. Overall I see greatness in this song and it has potential to make it big time.
That's my wordI don't really know how I feel about this song I'm just going to let you know that for me personally that hook is not where it's at I don't know if it's the repeating of the two words or what but it is how about shut the sound off when I first start listening to it your lyrics are a little simple the best one I've heard in there was astronomical but I don't know man that hook really really really threw me off that would be really hard for me to listen to you know what I mean cuz it's just it's annoying is what it is that's my personal thoughts on it other than that I mean it was a decent song it wasn't nothing great by any means not trying to bring you down or nothing just saying hey that's that's just me maybe there's different songs that you have that are anything like that and they could be real dope that's that's just me though you know I hope you don't take it in a negative way I hope you take it as constructive criticism I know that it came out pretty negative but I just got to say hopefully all your music isn't like that and hopefully I'll run across another one of your songs that just blows my mind
THAT'S MY WORDLET IT BURN FAM.... REAL TALK I NEEDED TO HEAR SOMETHING LIKE THIS SOMETHING THAT MAKE YOU VISUALIZE WHAT YOU HEAR THAT'S MY WORDI'M FEELING IT.. LAID BACK FLO WITH A CLASSIC BANGA DEFINITELY FEEL THIS
honest ReviewThe Sound is Real NY lol i wasn't really feeling the hook, but i do fukks wit the verse tho he def got bars, the mix is clean adlibs on point only thing i would change the hook it coulda been hella catchy on some shaft shit
NiceYour music is slapping good work ethic and keep driving to be on top.. You got the tools your own sound let's get this..... Check my music out BTW let me know what tour think Coldflo look up om YouTube as well
Classic hip hopI so fux with you lyrically . I love the sound of classic hip hop. I do think that if you played with the background of the hook a bit and tightened it up it would be perfect in my opinion on so many levels.. that’s my word... shit got that New York jay z feel to it .. you got what the game is missing..
NiceI like it plus the fact Brooklyn been reppin..and I'm a east coast dude flow dope, delivery dope..beat dope all around classic chit here B keep doing your thing on the music tip let them know on my word, dope
Your production is magicalHi. My name is Splitendz The PROFIT here in Los Angeles Ca and I'm apart of BugleBlack Music Group. Bugleblack is a real trumpet player who also plays cords in piano plus keyboard etc. What we do is specialize in JazzHop meaning hiphop and Jazz production and we got this stuff on lock. The essence of music is universal, so here on N1M this allows us to network amongst people like you. I e recently had the opportunity to make music videos from my S8 Samsung and now it's on. I'm a gifted artist meaning that I draw for a living. So visually I see the whole world as a wonderland. Now days I'm making progress in production right now. I've been trying to get these sounds out of my head and they are coming together.
nice I can vibe too broNice bro it's hot check me out also mrpelican I'm working on some new stuff also..100 let's keep it coming bro I like your style with it keep it up nice instrumental too I can vibe to it bro 100
I love this songWhen it comes on it sounds look Kd Jay-Z beat but I like how it sound when you rap it fire and I really love it keep doing your thing you are very good at what you do I didn’t expect how you came on the song but you bodied this shit