Nice guitar intro! Female vocal is sexual! I feel russian soul in;) "Masha" is something special;) Best wishes to you in music! Christian Van Boollen (vanboollen.eu)

Nice Intro. Has a salsa feel to it to me, Jazzy too. The beat is deifferent, I like the hook. Its alot going on with this song, constant changes. Overall good song, Good Job and Good Luck. Note: Lets connect on social network. Facebook;https://www.facebook.com/luckee.luchiano?ref=tn_tnmn#!/pages/Luckee-Luchi/183962798334537 Twitter;@760_Luch

You sound Like Kid Cudi when you first came on mixed with a little pit bull. I think that you have potential. but the beat and the overall way of this was like put together. I would say this this is great party music to get funky down with to each its own.

I see that your taking some chances; which I commend you for..but the rhyming sucks and doesn't mix well, and your parts need a better sense of nuance and arrangement.

Interesting song. Should go places. The first part between 00:00 to 00:42, is an unusual beginning which gets your attention, the male voice is blurred, cannot understand the lyrics at all. The female voices ending at 01:34 are good. A foot tapper. Good luck! ;) 02:35 same problem with the male voices.

If, by "Pickup," you mean pickup lines, like when a guy tries to "pick up" a woman with clever verbal approaches, then the different sounds in the song make perfect musical sense, because they represent the different approaches the guy is taking to get the girl. We must always consider the title of a song in our review of it. Now, I'm not sure what the artist intended by the title, but if I am correct in my thoughts here, then this is certainly NOT a bunch of disconnected threads. I hope I am right. That being said, the music is catchy, the rhythm has a Spanish dance movement to it, and altogether I enjoyed listening to it.

The music arrangement need work on the song didn't impress me and the backup singer act as if they didn't know when to come in.St.Louis,Mo.

That was awesome! Keep it up! Check my music out at www.Facebook.com/NileRossMusic I opened up for Rick Ross back in February! Follow me on twitter too @NileRoss

Not my style of music, but it sounds well done to me.

Too many elements but shows great imagination. Keep at it

a lot of different elements makes for interesting ear candy but as a song it falls short just no direction decent recording job not sure what to make of this hodgepodge of ideas? recording is a very upper midrangy could use smoothness around the edges

Nice 1 I like it keep up the good work