The beginning with the dj was ill and the chorus is nice. VOICE OVER CAN BE BETTER! The WORD PLAY COOL THE VOICE AND DELIEVERY WAS SMOOTH. THE TRAVK WITH THE HORNS WAS GOOD TO GO! OVERALL YOU SOLID

This song has a great vibe, very lyrical and truthful. Truthfully, this track has a real 90s feel, meaning it's true hip-hop. Please provide more tracks like this bro. Also, would love if you would check out my music also if it's not a problem.

In my opinion: This song is a dope concept. You're definitely on the right track as an artist. I would recommend that you brush up on your flow as far as flowing smoother with the beat. Keep Pushing !!!

This track is nice and very catchy. Like that Text Appeal. Like where you were going with this. Beat is nice. Nice delivery. Keep up the good work and remember never give up on your dreams. By the way, we are open to collaborations. Check out our music on our page and if you like what you hear please feel free to reccomend it. Thank you in advance. And again nice catchy track. -The Organization

I think this artist has lyrical ability like back in the day when hip-hop was about lyricism, personally I like when rap is is having content and lyricism. the beat to this song is pretty cool too I think the producer did a pretty good job. The rapper stayed consistent with his good flow and good word play I would like to hear more from them. more beats more rhymes I think they would have more dope material. You know what even I think he would do good in battle rap competitions. He has that battle rapper flava. I'm about to go check out the page hoping to hear more music. One

Nice flow and dope production lyrics with substance there are few of us left but Im glad cats are outta doing that track complete and the song has a great sonic texture also very very nice self elevation I see ya bruh

nice track blood nice on the word play humorous and on point it was a pleasure to listen to your music filled with life and positivity it is a good spin from all the garbage they be pushing out there i hope you get played on em major stations maybe you could put back some life in the genre seriously lol you came through alright with this one hope to hear more from your catalog king ...stay blessed #ThisIsWhatWeDo

Keep doing your thing sounds good nice flow. Keep pushing for that dream and don't let anything get in your way. You can also check out my music on here my name is fate ranked #1 in Portland or

Its a nice track, I really like the concepts and the records, at first I was a Lil bit skeptical about it but I played it a few times and it made me realized that's a good track I just wish it was a Lil bit longer but its fine to me it could been longer cuz this is actually a good song. I was playing it in front of a few peeps they actually gave you props but they all say at the end the track should have been longer. But anyway its a good track. You got my pass on it just keep publishing and promote in your neighborhood then you ll see the outcome. Thanks bro keep doing your thing.

The beats is very tough, your lyrics and delivery are superb. The content it amusing, but I can't play it around my kids. I respect your skills and will look for more of your music. There are many records dissing the industry and this seems to be another one. I would love to see what an uplifting point of view would sound like coming from a skilled lyricist such as yourself.

Self Elevation, what's up the track was all right and I really did not like the beat. The mix was cool and your lyrics were on point for your track. The beat was not my cup of tea. Keep working on your music, peace.

Woo your flow is very unique. Haha the chorus is really catchy, Keep up the good work! this really went in no lie. The instrumental is too clean also. I like how it was smooth and than you toke of.

Positives: Flow is absolutely amazing, i mean damn, lyrics also. Love to hear someone use and rap on this type of beats. Negatives: I really dont like how the hook is mastered, idea was on spot but ampliturdes of vocals are so high up that u cant hear the beat at all, and its a shame since u put all that work in lyrics and flow to match beat in the first place.

Keep up all the hard work and dedication Heat-loving what you doing your sound is nice music is from the heart and I could tell you put your all into it don't ever let nobody tell you or make you stop

This track is nice im being for real, your delivery is hot and the concept is different too not your average or common type of track, the only thing i found that lost you half a star is the the amount of reverb and echo on the hook, maybe a little less then it will be a 5 star track, keep it up man