I really like the atmosphere of the song. vocals are very pleasant and well-suited to bit. I don't think the intro is weak, introduces a mysterious atmosphere - you don't know what will happened. However, I would add more power to the music in the refrain. Keep It Real Mate

Didn't like the intro at all. It fills amateur and goes on TOO long. The flow is good but need to practice on speaking clearer. The hook is ok. The beat is to simple and needs to be redone.

I think that your flow is okay, maybe another beat it dont justify the song. Or either you can put more to your song because it's really empty. I would just add to this song fill in the gabs. Because now listening to the beat it slides. Just add some lyrics or adlibs.

nice track!

you have some nice content. There is too much open space of just the instrumental. It could use some more wordplay. In the beginning it is slow & drags, but then you kick up the flow in the 2nd verse