Robert Green / Songs / Smile

Stick to the Subject

When writing a song stick with the title. Smile should be in your chorus/hook. Singing in the background must be lower so listeners can hear your message. Remember a song is a short sorry written three parts with a hook/chorus.


Nice song, flow, lyrics and beat. You did a very good job and you hitting that note shows your ability of being a great vocalist. I wish you the best of luck and much success with your music career.

5 Star Music

I Like The Song, Nice R&B n Your Voice Is Awesome Keep Up The Great Work, An Keep Pushin For Greatness, Cant Wait To Hear More Of Your Music, 5 Stars, MaddLove Salute. God Bless You Have A Bless n Wonderful Day Today

Do over

The words are nice, the arrangement is nice. The music is nice as well, decent. All in all, its nice but the vocalist...sounds good not great. Some notes were off, need to be done over for a better quality of song.

Need to be more natural

I like the overall concept of the song. It felt as though certain parts of the song, your voice strained, but then some notes you hit very well. I think this will come with better vocal practices so it comes out more natural. I like the feel, almost like a Keith Sweat song. I feel it was well written. Just work on the vocals so you don’t strain and it will be great. Keep it up!

getting better

this track is amazing king and your vocals are exceptional no joke i really love this track you've recorded keep putting in your time and effort and you will see huge success keep at it you have made me proud with this one #dakrazyway

Great Backgrounds

This was a very nice track, I enjoyed listening to the music, nice and smooth with some good changes. The lead vocals were weak on the runs without a breath. Good story line throughout. But altogether a nice song.

Tha Believer

Tha Believer I like that beat bro and your flow sounds really really good. We got alot in common. Collabs go be done bro fasure. You got a style that I can get hip to and a flow that I can relate to. Fasure we gotta get something popping. We gotta take over the charts bro. Not just me but my boys to bro. I feel we can all vibe with each other. They got some fire and you got some fire so we gotta get something done. Keep it up bro. I like what your doing and you'll get far I guarantee it


Listening to the song At first I felt it was a little low. But after hearing the key change after the bridge I was sold. Some of the background vocals are a little bit too loud almost to the point that they overpower the melody. The lyrics are decent but some of the ad libs and main vocals are also a little shaky

Just amazing!!!

U take me back to a time where music was music! Your voice is wonderful n u have an amazing range vocally and talent wise!!!! I really appreciate u sharing this song with me! Was this also written by u? If so, my hat is off 2 u 4 that as well!!!

Good song Rob!

The song is well done, with really cool harmonies and some really cool lush layering on the backing vocals. the lyrical content is also good but surprising to us since we have heard your other songs as well. So, we expected the good lyrical content my brother. I noticed you also added some more space on your lead vocals by making them lush with a bit of reverb and delay. I would add the same to the backing vocals as well and take the EQ down in the middle a bit on lead and backing vocals to make it sound more integrated into the music and not separated. Also, a bit more compression in the master mix will help control those few volume peak spots. Your music is good bro! keep working and writing you will get to where you want to go. God bless my friend and good luck! P.S. Make a CD and listen to it in the car and in your home stereo and you will hear more.
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