Robert Green / Songs / God Will

God Will Review

YES! Very, Very nice and moving. I truly love the lyrics and your golden pipes give them such life and spirituality to meditate your heart on. The composition is absolutely on point with the vocals, nice music flow and of course you know I dig the harmonies. Such a beautiful addition to your repertoire. You may want to consider coming over to my partners and being featured in our music awards show every year pozeproductionscom Check us out. We'd love to have you.

God Will

Hi again Rob. Again, you have gathered a great group of musicians to be sure. Your voice remains secure and pleasant to deliver the message of hope. :) Your story line of encouragement is most awesome, but some of the choices for your words causes the song to feel a bit "clumsy" in an area, if I might use that word. (Sorry, but . . . ) Example: right at the start, your words are "trials and tribulations." The number of syllables in the word trials is 2, whereas the number of syllables in the word tribulations are 4; they do not match, and therefore create a conflict. Might I suggest a change in the wording to something like "trials and troubles?" This would provide you with a 2 and 2 match. Nice musical change up in the area of "taste and see . . . " As usual brother, keep puttin out the great vibes for our Lord in your sphere of influence. Have a very Merry Christmas as well Rob! Blessings, Trev. :)
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