Pocahontas / Pocahontas / Please Be Mine

Dope work here

I like how the beat comes in, starts off slow and draws you in. The vocals come in and i like what i hear, the artist has a good concept of riding the beat and adding her backgrounds. I am a producer and have been with a few seasoned producers where i learned the importance of background vocals and riffs which she uses well. i do recommend turning down the hall echo or that phone tap effect a little bit from the background vocals on the second half of the song. Great job

Yours.

The beat is very chill, this is the type of music you play when you need to take a drive and feel like ur the one they need and you dont need them even if you want them. The vocals are soothing, could be a bit crisper but I like the potential this artist has. Look forward to what they may come up with next, hopefully, something more get up and dance. Definitely vibing with this while I'm at work though! Might need to replay.
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Positive feedback

I love the beat! I love your vocals and lyrics! My only issue is the recording, it's talking away from what your giving to your listeners, I definitely think you should voice over the track. I'll love to hear what your offering one hundred percent cause I think you have something amazing to offer! Sometimes we as artist get lost in the hype of recording that we miss the main point.. I think this song is dope.. will really like to hear a better quality
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Beautiful voice!

Beautiful voice and the lyrical content is great! I can’t wait to hear more from this artist I know she has a bright future ahead of her! This is the type of song that will get stuck in your head for all the right reasons!
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Congratulations!!!

I listened to your music and I loved it! Congratulations for your songs, good music and beautiful song !! ???????????????????? Best artist ???? Keep it up ... I gave you 5 stars because you deserve it !! I wish you good life !!! Hi ????????
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Hola Pocahontas.

Tienes una voz muy linda. La grabación es muy original y la canción me gusta. Deseo que tengas mucha suerte con éste trabajo. Seguiré escuchando tu música. Tienes muy buena presencia. Muchos besos.
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Unique ballad of R&B in Pop style

Have listened to this song a couple of times. Grabed me right from the start. An nice love-song with good feeling. The arrangement characterize smooth effects from syntheziser generated sounds creating a great space. From the bridge over the chorus to the refrain are accompained by smooth digital tunes. The electronical effects inspired by back-spinning sounds could be better arranged. Also the dancefloor rythm of the drum- and bass-lines isn´t perfect in this arrangment, but the up-tempo beat is forcing the music constantly on a higher level. Aniiyah Jackson creates beautiful harmonic melodies and has the ability to versatile her sound with a great vocal projection. That is especially clear to hear in the brilliant chorus. This extrafactor makes the tune more creative. The lyrics are impressive and coming from the heart. Overall a unique ballad influenced by musical styles like R&B and Pop. This ambitious arrangement could played with a better mixing in some club-scenes. But I´m sure you will also enjoy the track as you hear and likewise add it.
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Keep it movin

Love the beat, love the sound great work keep it up pocahontas and if you're interested in checking out some new music be sure to check out my page much respect and have a blessed day thank you
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BE MINE REVIEW

I REALLY LOVE HA SONG YOUR VOCAL RANGE IZ ON POINT BUT I SUGGEST STRONGER WRITING AND FIND A BETTER ENGINEER, BECAUZE THA THINGZ I HEAR WRONG ARE ALL ENGINEER MISTAKEZ. BUT I WOULD LOVE HEAR MORE FROM YOU DO YOU HAVE ANY PROJECTZ IN THA WORKZ? SEE IF YOU CAN FIND SME STRONGER PRODUCTION FOR YOUR NEXT SONG AZ WELL
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A good starting point

Ur mix needs more work. Are you working with anyone? Do you have a writer? I feel like I can see where you were going with the concept. I think if you had so me one working with you to teach you various vocal patterns and inflections, along with a dope lyricist, you could make some noise! Always remember you only get one chance for a first impression and some ppl won't give you a chance because of poor sound quality.
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Hello from Jerzy

If.. If... You make a background music better to Fit the Song...as now... Your sing a melody and the background do NOT match it...I do not like a computer generated music.. I think You must found a good producer which will put together a nice production...good luck with it...Jerzy..

Nice

 This makes me feel good riding in my car on a hot summer day while the top dropped playing it real loud nice flow to it nice beat lyrics sound fire on this track i will be playing this one for real
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Please Be Mine

I know you intended this as a ballad, BUT, when I listen to your melody and you lead vocal, I think you should do a club remix as well. Both will sound nice. One problem, the second version is out of key. You have to do it over. It's a great track and worth it. I suggest taking a lot of the reverb OFF your vocal or making it's trail shorter. Leave it natural. You have the voice for it. The backgrounds are cool. Good job! Remember do that club remix. It will be hot!
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like the artist

i think she has a nice voice but need some guidance and vocal arrangement did really care for the recording side of it, it just not a good recording and the writing can be a lot better but i can see where she need to be but the writing and the track and the recording are not on the same page but i do like her as a artist

Good Song

I think you have a good song. Some parts of the song you got off key. Don't be afraid to put more expressions on your lyrics. You want your listeners to get the same feel you get from the song. Also, getting a good mix on your vocals as well as the music itself is one key to having a GREAT song. Music is all about expressions. "KeepTheVision" ~MVP~
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