Paradoxz / Songs / Lay Yu Down Snippet


I love the lyrics. Love the track and like your tone. The flow of the lyrics could be a little smoother. I think I heard another one of your songs on here, it was really nice as well. Your structures are very nice. Awesome work!


this song snippet sets the mood , 1 can relax with this smooth sounds great vocal ! this is a movie song lay back open up warm the spine head to toe , lots of feeling the vocals hit the spot and warms every thing from the in side out ! thanks for the listen Keep @ it nice song ! Ram Fx


Una canción muy corta, está bien, pero como principio de una canción. Creo que debería continuar y empezar de nuevo con más fuerza, cuando sube la intensidad de la voz, baja la de la música. Me parece una buena canción pero incompleta. A very short song, it's fine, but as the beginning of a song. I think I should continue and start again with more force, when the intensity of the voice rises, the music decreases. I think it's a good song but incomplete.

Good but we need the rest !

Good intro..I mean, there is no intro but the atmosphere is good and the vocals immediately come to the point, so it grabs the attention at once. The intewoven backing vocals also sound good. Now this being said, why have a snippet only, why can't this turn into a very tasteful number, with more of that ; plus, of course an instrumental somewhere, a catchy chorus, anything to support the work already done. You are on the verge of writing a proper song, so don't wait : back to the drawing board, to add those musical ideas everybody is waiting for : I am sure you have recorded the beginning of a compelling tune -just finish it off please, it deserves it ! Phil, France.
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