O-NYX / Acoustic 2017 / Wall of pain (acoustic 2017)

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I'm not sure what is this..You make 2 songs in one ..and they do not match... Arrangement is one .. and vocal is the other..and put together sound not so good..in my opinion this song has to be rewrite..rearranged and re recorded..well try to pitch it to AM / FM Radio Stations and Music Publishers and let's see what They will say..on top of that is to long... as You know Radio use only 2.5 - 3.5 min long..the song is not ready for "The World" yet.. work on it.. make it better.. good luck...

Powerful country rock ballad

Good production, musically, it sounds really great, you guys control your universe and it shows.The only thing that might need a little work is the repetition and the lenght of the song. I really like the progression post refrain and the ambiance the song express. Keep up the good work!!

Sweet "Wall of Pain"

Melodic, sweet tune! Driving bass line that keeps the song moving along gently. Brings back memories form long ago - a walk on the beach, a gazing look of love across the table at your lover not knowing if he/she feels the same way that you do. O-NYX delivers on this tune of love and heartache, after all I'm not invincible and the wall you built, is a wall of pain!

O-NYX has a hit with Wall of Pain!

First off, love the acoustic guitar intro. It sounds awesome when the bass and drums come in. The vocals are also very good. Really nice melody as well. The chorus section "Another Dance - Have a Chance" would sound more dynamic with some back up harmony vocals. The harmony in the "Believe in your Self" part is good. Maybe something like that could be in the "Another Dance" section. Over all, the song is well mixed - every part can be heard and nothing over powering. I like the two guitar parts and the bass part with the short staccato notes. Drums are outstanding. It is just a well written song. I think this song is ready for prime time.

Impressive stuff

Love the chorus.Excellent vocals and nice production.The acoustic intro is beautiful.I see you are from France-I can hear that very subtlely in the singers speech but its not really that noticeable.Classic rock indeed-this is an anthem.80s rock but quieter(acoustic reference in title contributes towards this)Otherwise realy good.C'est tres bien!Did French at school,don't remember much but it is a beautiful language like your music-classic rock indeed!Would have loved to hear a guitar solo though.

Wall of pain

This song made me feel good vibes. It's relaxing and inspiring. The production is very good and the performance is professional. The singer voice is beautiful. He can show his feelings through the singing.

The whole package is tied up very well

Very nice guitars with subtle drum pattern starts to welcome the voice which is supported by the bass, which draws it's own lines and all fits perfectly together, if one likes this kind of classic rock style thing. I do. In this case. All is done well, performing, recording, mixing and song writing. For me it does not sound as to find your origins in France. The whole package is tied up very well, so there's only one thing left to say: Good Luck!

Another good one

Good song, playing, production as usual. I would nestle the vocal down into the mix a little to let the backing have smidge more prominence, but that's me, others would disagree I'm sure. I wouldn't have minded a short melodic guitar solo mybe over a bridge with a different backing than the verse and chorus music, just to change things up a bit. As I've said before the vocal talent is what sets you apart. Nothing against the band and their fine musicianship, but quality lead vocalists are rare as hen's teeth, and this is first rate singing as always.

Pleasantly Surprised

Wow, great stuff... I love the rhythm section... vocals are great and all around excellent song writing. I would defiantly check you out live... harmonies sound tight... good message... I dig it man! great!

Wall of Pain Review

Very cool and somber vibe, This song Sounds like breaking up with your significant other on a rainy day. Strong vocalist and great Lyrics. The musicianship is fantastic, O-NYX is hitting on all cylinders and really captured the melancholy emotion with "Wall of Pain" I give it 4 stars.

Borderline country song

The main vocal line is on the cusp of sounding like a country singer. Drums sound great the mix is also perfect. I wouldn't guess you guys are from France Over all a nice ballad I will definitely be listening to more songs from O-NYX

Great sound

This is a well recorded and produced song. O-NYX have done a great job with "Wall of pain". The acoustic guitar sound is fantastic and almost crystal like in it's timbre. The Bass and Drums on this track ensure the rhythm section provides a solid platform for the melody and contra-melody to skip over the top effortlessly. The vocals are also well recorded, sounding great and thought inspiring too....great work.

It's a beautiful ballad.

Wall of pain is a great and smooth rock song, all the parts play right in a dream ambience and the voice warm and velvet lead the listener on the poetical words of lyrics, giving relaxed winter sensactions.

WALL OF PAIN

NICE ACCOUSTIC GUITAR INTRO VERY MELLOW WITH GREAT GUITAR TONE AND GOOD PASSION WITH THE VOCAL DELIVERY THESE GUYS HAVE MANAGED TO CREATE A FULL SOUND YET HAVE A LOT OF SPACE IN THE SONG AND NOT OVERDO IT WITH UNECESSARY SOUNDS CLUTTERING UP THE PRODUCTION A LITTLE LONG ON THE DURATION BUT APART FROM THAT DEFINITELY WORTH A FEW LISTENS FOR THOSE QUIETER REFLECTIVE MOMENTS

Nice Song

Nice song, the voice reminds a bit of Nickelback. The melody is also good reminding contemplation momments. The instrumental is very good. Just the equalization/mixing of the voice can be tunned for better quality of the song. Keep up with the good musics!
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