nice flow/ message.The autotune was a tad bit much.It also need a good mix to bring out all the instrument parts. I like the concept keep grinding.

Nice idea and good sound, but mix needs more work... the voices are confused and unclear.

the mix is MUDDY!!! LYRICS ARE OK IF YOU CAN GET BY THE MIX.

i can't hear the instruments in the music. i don't know if it's a bad mix or what. The lyrics are ok. It sounds like your flow was off a little. make sure you don't out run the beat...

Song was pretty good, had a story behind it. The mixing could've been better. I feel when you take a beat like this from a popular artist you really have to put a lot into it because people are just going to compare it to the original..... and I think this could've been a lot better

Nicely done arrangement of the song, I liked it when it swtiched from rapping the vocals to singing them it brought out the emotion a little more, Good job and Best wishe's

Good vibe, Good rap..But not much after that...

The chorus fits well with the instrumental,& sounds great. This is instrumental was done by Drake,but I'd like to hear what you could do on a original beat (just my opinion). The lyrics were good,& were in correlation to the vibe,& story telling of the song. All together, this is a well made song to all aspects. Good Job...Keeping Grinding! eMAZING

The vocals are mostly good and the lyrics work well. I like the instrumental portions of the song the most, good mix of instruments. I think the actual recording / mixing needs help, its not clear enough for my liking. I am more into the music than lyrics. I want a beat that breaks through the song and smashes you in the face. Keep rockin.

great song

Good Song This Has all the elements. Verse,or Rap. Chorus and a well composed musical track. It is a sad storyline, The words and emotion convey the singers pain and dispair very well. All in All a very good piece.