Wandering TrailsHi Muonbluze! Your song is very soothing and peaceful! It would sound very nice on a fishing show or nature trail show! Other than that, the guitar is clean and very pretty! Like the title! Thank you for sharing your song!! Rachel :-)
Ragged around the edgesMuonbluze's recording of "The Pretty Song" starts with a very nice guitar playing peacefully by itself for 4 bars, and I'm thinking "This is nice. I could totally imagine hearing this on the Spa channel on Sirius XM." Then a second guitar comes in -- I'll call it the lead guitar -- and it feels like an intrusion. The tone of the lead guitar isn't as nice and organic as the intro guitar, and while both instruments are being played well, the two guitars are slightly out of timing with each other at several points in the song. This is particularly noticeable when the rhythm changes to syncopation. If the guitarist is not using a click track, perhaps this would help. When the song is nothing but guitar, the guitars have to be played impeccably, and I'm afraid this cut is just a little too ragged around the edges. The underlying composition is very nice, but could be cut down to 3 minutes without losing anything vital. The talent is there, so just tighten up the execution! Very much worth listening to.
The Pretty SongHello! Ah! Someone who do the same thing, like me. I compose some tunes with the guitare and record it but I am more folk. For this tune, I like the concept of the song. The sound is very dry but it makes a mood. You probably recorded it pluged straight from your pickup. I like the technic it's realy well articulated.I suspect that you have a loop of the second guitar when you return to your first movement the second time. And you loose the fluidity of the tune, the rythme is impacted some times. But this is a cool tune! Keep it up!
belle musiquebonjour, j'ai écouté votre musique, et j'ai aime bien votre pretty song, jolie , simple et acoustique, c'est aussi avec une belle sonorité que vous avez qui séduit et me plait, en espèrant vous encourager avec ces quelques mots.. bien à vous A.Z.