SALUTE homie..this is true hip hop from being a baby of the culture, and having a father as a Dj. I miss the art that's neglected currently but your air a reminiscent sound. The beat and melody of the instrumental was on point, smooth and melodic with that hip hop edge. Your flow mixed well with the beat and the storyline read like a hood soap opera definitely entertaining. You want to know more about the message of the song. Next time try to use different effects maybe a light reverb jus to give it more of that old school hip hop feel. You should try to be more detailed with your writing start thinking more descriptive like sound, smell, places that are visual and relative with the listener.Also switching up your wordplay such cadences can elevate your style. Just some constructive criticism. Good job though on the track you made want to hear more. One.

I listen to your song "Dilemma" multiple times and came with the same conclusion every time. the instrumental and your flow is that hip hop style - Dilemma was a very laid back song, the type of flow I listen to - Felt word play could of schemed more, but over all a chill song to listen to - for the hip hop heads.

Yo i like the story funny but at the same time real cuz fake mofo's be doing things like that. keep pushing till u get to were u want to be. So is it sum thing u went through or someone close to you been through. either way thats F'd up

I'm a big fan of the movie Juice, like the hook, feeling the lyrics... been there to. I think the mellow beat and powerful lyrics go well to capture the point of the song. Nice Work!

Bruh you got talent like a muhfucka i rocks with this holla at me.for the collab If you like my music get at me bruh one www.reverbnation.com/ExodusMDP

I enjoyed listening to this song. It was laid back and the talent is obviously there. I felt like parts of a story were being told. I would've given it 5 stars if I understood all of the meaning behind the song. Remember that the storyline is everything in a song. The more that a fan can relate to what they hear, the more fans you will have. Rap is telling a story. As a producer, I would also suggest adding just a little more detail behind the introduction. I found myself waiting for the hook again at the beginning. That space allows an opportunity for you to say who you are, build the song or storyline up, or to simply fill in with some sound effects or echo that will keep my attention longer. Overall, I'm pleased with what I hear and I encourage you to keep doing what you are doing. I'm an honest person and if it wasn't good, I would tell you. It's good.

VERY WELL PUT TOGETHER MUSICALLY AND LYRICALLY, HEARTFELT, TRUTH MUSIC. DEFINITELY RIDING WORTHY FOR THEM LONG TRIPS ON A GETAWAY. IPOD SHUFFLING, "THIS MY JOINT..." FEELING WHEN IT COME ON. MUCH RESPECT FOR POURING IT OUT ON THIS ONE....PEACE. ~"SB1" *;;*

First off, I fw this beat so hard just cause personally I like slow beats and the chill beats tell the deepest stories. I like the topic you stayed on you had some real talk in it, And that's what gets everybody to keep listenin because its relatable. atleast one other person has gone through what you've been thru yanno. But overall Great song. I fw it. keep doin what you gotta do

siccass beat homie.love the style dawg.keep doin ya thing homie.i enjoy lyrics the rhythm the topic so many can relate to.i enjoy your originality.that's everything in this game dawg keep it up n check me out my name is Tigh http://www.reverbnation.com/tylerwooters or here on n1m

feelin the beat it really sets the tone. dope hook and some lyrical, yet real life spit keep up the good work hmu if you need beats or collabs kidbro.mofo@hotmail.com and check out my music here: soundcloud.com/kidbrosounds

Dope beat great voice nice delivery nice word play intelligent vocabulary nice hook could be better if the blank spots be filled after first two wrists up. then make it obvious that you're entering you verse with a transition, love the story line of the song, just add more lyrics to hook(why I lite your wrist up just another dilemma send a cab to pick this bitch up, something like that other than that great song, makes me want to hear more tracks salute

Bro you got real talent for real. I listened to a fee of your tracks and i think you got what it takes. Just keep doing you and i will see you at the top. The track is on point and the lyrics are killer. Great job homie!

Is some pretty deep shiiiit. It's always is a good thing when people can pretty much relate to the music. Good shiiiit bro. If you keep taking your experience down on paper you have a great album in no time!

I like the entry of the song and the addition of the smooth lyrics was a very nice touch. Nothing overly hard. Like the emotion and the lyrics were clear and understandable.

lyrics are good but the beat doesn't fit you, it needs something like a singer or something to make it stand out because this song is going to be forgetful, keep up the grind and god bless