Seconde Chance / EP Partir Seul / #5 Nos rêves

Builds Nicely

This song develops nicely. There is a clear melody line and a good balance of familiarity and variation. The energy increases, pulls back and then peaks. Nice work. I would like to hear more by this artist.
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Nos Reves

To Seconde Chance: I've listened to this song a few times and every time I come up with the same result: the overall mix is so spatial and effects-driven that the beauty of the instrumentation, the vocal clarity, and the lyrics never have a chance to shine. So my review will be based mostly on the engineering aspects. Your players are good...their parts are good, but there is no clarity or separation. Whether its the overuse of effects, the way the tracks lay in the mix, or the original individual track recordings, it all gets lost in a spatial final mix that does not serve your song very well. The vocals need to be clear and on top of the entire mix...I can't even truly distinguish the words right now...and I'd like to. The instruments need to be balanced in the mix....panned for effect and clarity...and highlighted when they have a special part to add...not all the time. Let the rhythm tracks be solid and clear...and then place your overdubs (leads) in a way that will let them contribute to the recording, but shine when they need to shine. Hope this helps... All the best... Tom
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Excellent Work

One of the things I enjoy most about Number One Music artists is the newfound ability to hear music from around the world by singers who I'd never have the chance to listen to otherwise. That, in itself, is a great thing. Here, with this song we've got an electronic intro much like the Eurythmics of the 80's. Vocally, this is very pleasant to enjoy. The production and mixing give this a professional quality. Viva Seconde Chance!
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Slick, Well Produced Pop/Rock

There isn't much I would suggest to improve this song exept to make it shorter. People have short attention spans and the key is to leave them wanting more when the song has finished, instead of waiting for the song to end.
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#5 Nos reves

Nice, bouncy intro. The vocals are good. I like the way the electronic instruments compliment the vocals. This is a, great arrangment. Overall, the song has a soothing effect on the listener.

Honkies R Us

Fabulous stuff here from these pop rockers. This has elements of the Detroit-born house music scene and Manchester post-punk scene, despite the cookie-cutter shake-n-bake track elements. The atmospheric synth and bleating bass can be felt in the chest cavity especially with a gullet full of molly. Nicely done honkies. Not really rock, but music nonetheless.
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Rockin the house !

I like it very much.the keyboards took the scene by assault.Sorry,you know that making music makes me a disgusting listener.That's why i hear what you got,and I got caught by the producer illness.But your song is wonderful.I really miss an electric guitar and some production tricks to find it perfect! Congratulations !
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