Song Reviews
I Won't Cry
Hey Kiwi Chi-Lou, I love your vocal talent. You have some anointed singers voice(s). Great melody in this acapella Spoken Word Song. I hear you have persevered through great heartache in this song lyric. A song about betrayal. I a glad you put it in Spoken Word Genre. I would suggest to you to put it in the Spiritual Genre as well and you will see maybe a greater fan base. I am glad you are posting this because it helps others who hear it to work through their pain. Great effort! You got the music in you! Don't give up keep composing!
United Kingdom
I like it
I honestly like it but I feel if you got the vocals leveled a little more and added a little ep it would bring out a better sound in your recordings but other than that it sounded good overall.
United States, New York, syracuse
Unique Song
First off thank you so much for sharing your music with me and the world continue to share your gifts stay outside the box continue to be unique I really like this track I really like the spoken word I really like the background music and your voice very unique very creative please keep me posted on any music that you may have coming now or that you already have that way I'm like to download your music. And may God continue to bless you and all that you go to do you have a wonderful day and enjoy the rest of your week peace God bless
United States, California, Every Where
The ancestors channeling
The beauty of the soul busting through.Attaching itself to the hearts and minds of the many Kiwi Chi-Lou came especially reminiscent of indiginous ancestors ith "I wont cry".The vocals are powerful the words poetic.Dope.
United States, Missouri, Sikeston
Beautiful
Love this. All the way on point. No need for music when you have vocals like this. Could bump this All day and be motivated. It speaks to you on so many levels and is so deep that it can easily carry you away. Keep it up
United States, California, Long beach
To Chi-Lou
I know you have the right idea, and the recording is good. But to be honest you have to tighten up on the singing. not all the notes are being hit at the same time or key. It's close, but in this business close has no place. I hope you take this, and hit the voice lessons hard. I have been at this awhile, don't wish to discourage anyone. It takes a lot of work to get this right. Best of luck.
United States, Virginia, Virginia Beach
Don’t cry
Keep going bro it all will work out in the long run keep ya head up and speak facts everyday all day never let your foot off they neck if u want to secede I wish u the best big ups let’s get it.... now
Georgia, Atlanta
More work needed
Hey there, there is much work needed on harmonies . . . the machine is not keeping you on key (in pitch) find a piano and learn to sing the notes you play. Or get some voice lessons. Don't give up! It takes much work, regardless of any natural abilities! Even the best work on pitch! It is THE most important thing with voice.
United States, Kentucky, Bowling Green
I Won't Cry Review
I actually liked it with the music but I still would have like to hear what kind of background would you use for that song. There should be a version with the music and one that is acapella. Other than that, very strong vocals and good story line
United States
I like it!
Thank you for your beautiful R&B, hip hop spoken words song. The number sounds very great. Go on like this. It is a pleasure to listen to. This performance was great to listen to and I appreciate it very much! Thank you for sharing your music.
Netherlands, Arnhem
Thx for asking
Thanks for asking me to review your song. It certainly is different which is what music is all about in my opinion. Accapella . Different and well done I listened to the very end personally I would have liked to have just a little bit of drums played lightly over the chorus but still a
United Kingdom, Nottingham
not bad
I Will not Cry is a typical piece of the way of making music only with the voices and is a genre that frankly I appreciate if done on certain levels. in your piece the voices seem well assembled together and it seems that the typical atmosphere of these pieces is created only that something is missing. I can not tell you what because the piece is nice but I can not perceive the completeness I can not perceive all that there must be in a piece like that.
Italy, italy
Review
Try it with music also. Music will allow you to add another tone of emotion to your message. Try strings, piano, violin, saxophone, and acoustic guitar. No drums, no bass, no symbols. Maybe a muted snare just for timing of the lyrics.
United States, California, Oakland
