AwesomeThis is a very beautiful poem. I love the instrumental and the way your vocals blends with it. The delay on the poem is priceless. I’m definitely getting this for my girl. After all it’s about love
Love it!!!Hi there! I'm definitely feeling this piece. I love the melodies and chord structures and riffs throughout this song. It sort of have the vibe of the group floetry. So definitely keep going! Keep me posted where and when performing. Again this piece is hot????
It's AlrightNow this is a great creation and I enjoyed listen to the spoken word and feel that songs should be done this way when feelings are being talk about. You did it up with song yours. Everything was awesome.
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Dawan just loves this music!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Dawan just loves this music!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! poems about life, love, and friendship that have, literally, changed my life, because they have changed the way I looked at and listened to the world. Since the dawn of civilization, artists of all forms have sought to express the essence of the human condition and the full range of human experience. Poetry has been one of the most common forms of this expression from the ancients until now. These words have an ability to capture the abstract emotions and concrete experiences that have been part of our humanity throughout the ages. Turning to the words of poems can help us to clarify and understand our own experiences better by connecting us to those others who have sought to do the same. Your music is a poem about life and love and it is alright you are the best at this and will forever be. DAWAN keep up the good work.
It's alrightWoow I'm so inlove with this sound, so Cool rhythm and very sweet words of promise. I admire your passion and love for writing. This is one of ma playlist track. Thank you very much and stay blessed
NiceThis makes me feel good riding in my car on a hot summer day while the top dropped playing it real loud nice flow to it nice beat lyrics sound fire on this track i will be playing this one for real
MI BABYWe All go thru situations just like that, Putting our Heart out there for someone, Only to see it All turn to !!!!!!!! Well You know that You understand, from the lyrics in Your track. It was very well written. BLESSEING
Beautiful, Seductive, VibesThis Spoken Word by Kiwi Chi-Lou GoHard is a nice twist on the genre. The seductive lyrics mixed with a vocal hook is different than the standard rap song with a vocal hook so this effort is special. The music is simple. Nice drum beat, some nice piano, bass is all that is really needed. They smartly didn't over orchestrate. Keep it simple stupid. Great effort.
It's AlrightIn The Aria of This Type of Track, This Is a Good Attempt To Enter....I Think That This Is Not The Way To Go..It Has Been Attempted, Many Times Before. Keep Working On Your Craft, & Come Back...Sorry. I Give This A @.2.0
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ReviewI love the spoken words over a cool vibrant beat. I think this is a exceptional track. The lyrics real and has a way of grabbing your attention. The hook is easy and smoove. The whole song was well thought out and has substance. I look forward to hearing more spoken word over a beat and catchy hook. I'm looking to collab with a artist with such talent in the future. For the song I'm giving you a 4 keep knocking this beats out the park with heart felt lyrics. One of my favorites so far.
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How are youThe poem is a great poem but the instrumental is off and doesn’t match up. The singing is a wonderful catch. However a better producer/engineer with an open mind set this could spread like a STD lol real spill tho... keep it up what your doing is art and art has different styles and presentation for everyone. You ever want support or advice you can always reach out. Working with others is always a good look and helps us see things from others perspective then our own
Not badDidn’t sound bad different. I would recommend one thing the guy singing was a little off on a couple parts the potential of this can be something great I’d like to hear more from you overall good stuff