very catchy...caught me from da beginning. like how u ride da beat

SHIT'Z TIGHT AND HOW U USED THE CHICK SAYIN' "BABY" IN UR RAPZ AND VERSE...FLY SHIT BRO

The sound in general is a good one, in this case, I agree with shazman, live shows will give you the answer you need, if the story you're telling means something for our audience then it will be great, I want to think that the use of just one loop is ti get the idea of one thought coming and going all around the song, so, not necessarily several loops will get your ideas through, the voice and the way the rap goes seems fantastic to me, it's a very sensual voice.. I guess you should pay attention on how your story works with the audience live! congrats! nice job!

Sound like Talib Kwali, I like it very much

Not a new sound but the track blend nice. No extraordinary rapskills but surely talented. Artist needs to write more and i clearly hear that live shows will do you good. You will learn a lot from live shows...even though you do one track. Try it out. You have talent.

Beat is not that good drums don't mind but it' gets boring after awhile with just to loop. Beat see kind of quick fr th raps but delivery is ok basic cadence but it rides and stays on beat pretty well CHorus pretty good

Hi Kakalakingjwill, Production : Drum's beat is too high in mix. Music : Just a loop while all that track, it's very boring, and the beats are not top and original. There is a work to do on the music. Voice : Classic, no fantasy, no surprise. Structure : Nothing, the same thing all the track. Work to do. It's just my opinion, and in Rap, I like Run D Mc, MC Hammer, Beastie Boys. Good luck

Mad Universal Love it!!