Hidden Thoughts / Songs / Change (Twista instrumental)

Just keep working on it

the first thing I noticed when you started rapping was that it sounded like you weren't opening your mouth enough to pronounce the words you were saying. I say that because as an artist myself and have done fast rapping before, people have told me to make sure I focus on enunciating and pronouncing my words when doing a fast rap so when people hear it they can understand my words easier so I'm giving you that same advice. As far as riding the beat with your flow you did just fine on. I think once you do these things I've told you to work on you will do fine at doing other fast songs. Just keep working on it.

sounds good

Hey bro nice keep up the good work rapping sounds aight if you stick to a dream you can make it a reality bro 4 sure it's hard but if you finance & focus anything can become a possibility right gl

Love the music

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Nice try

Wow I was not expecting to hear what I just heard. This is honestly how I feel about your song. The Rap flow was not good and very sloppy. You struggled to remain on beat and had words all jumbled up creating a mess in between the bars. The mix wasn't good and everything sounds amateur. I didn't really like the beat either. Your voice is different and perhaps that can be a good thing if you continue to practice but for now you have a long way to go. The song stopped way to abruptly at the end and should have had more closure to it... Not that I wanted to hear more but just for good songwriting purposes. Nice try and God bless you Sir.. If at first you don't succeed try and try again!

Dope

I like it. Love the flow. The mix and mastering is solid. Like the concept of the whole track. Its catchy and the hook is nice as well. You did a great job. Keep pushing and keep grinding. Keep God 1st and keep moving. Luv Boss.ttys Smooth I like it. Love the flow. The mix and mastering is solid. Like the concept of the whole track. Its catchy and the hook is nice as well. You did a great job. Keep pushing and keep grinding. Keep God 1st and keep moving. Luv Boss.ttys Smooth

Cool

Keep doing ya thang, you have a good sound and quality, hard work pays off so I'm sure if you keep grinding you will find your spot in the music industry, networking is the key, keep God first.

Sup!

You need a better mic, and your music was too loud. Couldn't really understand but of it. But it sounded like you was rocking it, so if you rocking with it, I'm rocking with it. Clear it up fam. You need a better mic, and your music was too loud. Couldn't really understand but of it. But it sounded like you was rocking it, so if you rocking with it, I'm rocking with it. Clear it up fam. You need a better mic, and your music was too loud. Couldn't really understand but of it. But it sounded like you was rocking it, so if you rocking with it, I'm rocking with it. Clear it up fam.

Change is banging

This song is really banging I love everything about the song and the track is hot fa real very unique style and very creative thanks for sharing your gift with me and I would love to hear more of your music especially if it's banging like this peace out and have a great day and may God bless you in your endeavors.

Change

I think you would have to work on the fast pace some more. I think you were rapping a little fast for the track and wasn't on time on a lot of the vocals. Keep pushing to get better tho. Keep doing ya thang.

Change review

I have nothing much to say regarding this track. I can't hear the words, the flow is on some other. keep doing what you do & hopefully there will be some "Change" as you keep creating more music
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