OkJust need to work when in doubt always brainstorm , it's a solid recording by I felt like you could have done way better , however the obscure plot really adds a twist for kicks when the club comes this guys there
NiceNice track keep up the good work. As Whoadi Hendrix says, "Stay 10 Toes Down." Good beat and production. Hope to hear more music from you in the near future. If you are interested in getting your music played on World Wide Core Radio contact Stephanie Marie aka #PROMOGOD on fb. ALL music must be in MP3 format no links allowed. Her SHOW airs every night at 8pm EST love on fb streaming through World Wide Core Radio. Free app in your app store. Click Core Country. You have now entered CORE COUNTRY! promogod614 @ gmail
Hidden ThoughtsI don't think the beat matches your flow for this song. Your flow is like a drip drop type of style or effect and it would take a unique beat to make that flow sound official. The hook needs major work done to it as well. I can admire your effort as I can tell that you must have just gotten started or that you don't do this often. I would continue to work on my craft, get honest feedback from "honest" friends or other people who will listen. Keep Working.
Keep working on your craft.I see where your going with the song and lyrics, i just think your craft needs some improvement. Find your style and swag, master it and you'll be just fine. Ultimately a nice song though, heartfelt. Keep up the work, nobody becomes a star overnight, good luck buddy and I hope to hear more in the future.
reviewseems like you are creative with coming up with concepts.. decent instrumental for a pop type of track or something new age..you just need to put more effort into projecting your voice along with rhythms..best i can say is keep up the practice and improve... this is constructive criticism..
Practice makes perfectionAt first I thought this was a joke when hearing what might be the hook, but this could easily be put in the category of being some what country. But it actually sounds like a situation you went through.
Song doesn't match beatNeed to be able to feel the music. Maybe change the wording and try having fun with it. Can't tell if you are trying to rap or make it an alternative or country type song. Sorry for the tough criticism
A really great songI'm not an artist or fan of this genre but i guess for the people that like this kind of genre of music would say it's really good me personally i think the artist has a really great voice and i think that this artist has allot of great things coming they're way like i said I'm not an artist or fan of this genre but to me it's sounds alright on a personal level i dont know anybody thats a fan or artist of this genre
DopeDope track will definitely be looking out for more to come and recommending your work to help build the anticipation and notoriety keep up the work keep pushing foward to help push the culture...salute!!!
THE TRUTH NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH MY FRIENDYESS I SAY AT HAND RUDDE OFF O.D BUT EARLYER I WUZ IN COME DOWN NOW I WANT TO COME BACK DOWN IFF YOU NO WAT I MEAN SO HEAR IT AT AN OVERDOZED HIGHEST BEST YOU GOT THE BEAT BUT LIAR LIAR LIRICALLY SOUNDS LIKE O.D SHIT IN A REAL DOWNER AND THATS LIKE THAT CUTT DRUGGZ I JUST ACAPELLA IT OUT AND THE BEAT ON BACK GROUND RANDOM ONE I THOUGHT WENT WITH MY LIRICS POINT BEING IS THIS YOU KEEP AT IT YOU WILL HAVE SUCESS CUZ AT THIS GAME THERE IS NO RIGHT OR WRONG ANSWER AT LEAST AT MY BEST HIGH RIGHT NOW I CCAN TELL YOU YOU IS A LIAR IF YOU BELEIVE IN WHAT OTHERS ARE SAYING ABOUT ME NOT THE WHY YOU CHOSE TO LET ME DESIDE GOOD OR BAD I SAY GOOD BEAT BAD VOCALS BUT ALMOST THERE PASE IT UP IS WHY I SAY JUST LIKE O.D!
Ok Dont take this in offense.I feel you need to pick better beats to rap to. I feel you need to change your delivery. Like the way you say the verse. You got one thing going on here and thats dedication to complete a song. But the rest got to go. I am never about crushing people, If you got the dedication to improve your skills not playing around and to take it serious, you can do it. I will tell you a trick someone told me, they used this method and it helps me sometimes when I am stuck writing. Invest In a thesaurus and a rhyming dictionary or even use online rhyming dictionary or thesauraus. Or even try not writing sometimes the best stuff comes when we freestyle cause the delivery is based on how the beat makes you feel. Keep spitting the lines over and over in your head slowly adding sentence after sentence. These are just little things to help on your success.. Or remember your verse word for word so you can change the speed of the verse any way you want instead of sounding like your reading it straight off of paper... thats the worst way to do it..You can throw all the stuff I say out the window if you like. or If you need any more advice hit me up in my inbox. I wish you success in the thing you love my friend. Take care.
OriginalI love the originality and creative take on a upbeat southern wave. Thanks for some good music i would say. #McbethSagittarius #XTENDOGANG #KINGME straight like that. Always stay true to your sound.
KillinNice flow and that beat is a banger!!! Where can I go to download and share all your music? What is your Twitter/Facebook/Instagram? Can I find you music on iTunes/Spotify/Pandora? Keep doing your thing!!
Never enoughSong is ok,you can do it over and GROVE to the beat a little more,put some swagg to it...beat is dope though....keep doing what you do,you have to start from some where,so continue to keep punch record's..
Good songFirst off id like to Thank you for letting me give you a review definitely felt the good vibes coming from this track had to show this song to my roommates with the quickness when i heard some real life action goin down it may not have the mainstream feel but it was still a great song when my recommend and earn time come back up ill share your music on my social media outlets keep up the good work and goodluck with getting shows this is definitely a great song