I. Believe it could be a very good song, but it lacks emotions, voice tones, true wanting. I wouldn't say these things if I didn't believe you have something here. Yet I believe you need to share more in tune vocal with a little more pain showing. Magic

I like the psycdelicness of it. The guitar is very good and the chord changes in parts of the song are very well done...... The vocals where a little weak and possibly needed another or different effect. ...Thanks for sharing

a sticky song, it catches you almost from the first moment, with quite commercial and entertaining rhythms for the ear, a good quality of sound and excellent musical development, very good work

Good sound and song writing is well. But singing is not convincing enough, sounds most of the time unsure with a lack of intonation. Guitar work is pretty good, I really like it. All in all it is charming, but not convincing at all. Good ideas which should be worked out more with more ability, let's say improve the singing and all will go well, and we'll see you in the charts. Best of luck to you!