DopeAye beat is dope asf and great mixing done on track , so shout out to whoever your engineer was and keep doing your thang keep grinding keep putting in that hard work and stay consistent Keep doing your thang keep grinding bro you definitely have potential and the talent is there continue to make that real music you doing and you gone make it fam that’s my opinion keep working
VariationsQuite an interesting spin on the national anthem. It had a variations feel like Mozart's Twinkle Twinkle Little Star. I like to use that technique in a lot of what I do because it really makes things interesting. Especially when you listen to the overall dynamics of a piece. It just adds an element that helps to differentiate one piece from the next. There was one particular part towards the end where you were using ascending and descending scales that sounded really neat. Definitely outside of the box. You have a very unique talent my friend. I look forward to hearing more of what you do. LS
HiI like this song A lot. Nice storyline, chord changes, Melody and some instrumental hooks Within. I think the lead break is maybe a bit too long but more importantly the intro is certainly too long before the vocals start. As you are most likely aware of in the music industry A&R makes their decisions to pass or accept within 20 seconds I don't think the vocals start within that time frame. And they don't accept the song based on the intro unless it's something like Satisfaction or Honky Tonk Women by the Stones. For a life performance no problem. I think it's worth repeating that in the music industry music industry players never really listened to the entire song they base their past or accept within 20 seconds. I hope you find this helpful and wishing you the very best with the song
Unique Christmas music approach.I liked it. I could not listen for an entire evening but for one song I found it entertaining and very professional sounding. Has a feeling between Christmas bells and church chimes! I would put this on during the Christmas season right along with my Music Box CD.