For the record, I don't listen to rock very often these days and I'm no expert on guitar work. For the most part, I liked the song. I really liked the blend of rock and electronic sounds. Very good first part, but in the later half, it didn't grab me as much. Maybe it's in the mix, something about the strings/orchestral sound that didn't gel with the rest. Or maybe too much is going on. But you have a big sound and are obviously talented. Keep up the good work. Cheers from Iceland! Jósef K. aka Wanker of the 1st Degree

Sort of grows on you . Could of done with more dynamics...the single voice came a bit late in my view at the end.

I really liked this song--the lyrics were close to my heart--so much like my song "beyond this cage"--Loved the chorus chord progression--don't know if it was--but would have made a great beginning--song sucked me in

Lyrics (especially verses) hold this song together. Needs work but you have a strong start. The song has strange transitions. Sometimes the mix is horrible and sometimes the synth playing is garbage. Simplify the song or play synth more in tune.

wow thank you,,,,great production sound very polished,,,vocals not in forefront enough for my taste,,,can't really hear what hes sayin alot of time,,,,,great gtr sound and the bridge was heavyyyyyyyy,,,,,good work, i like the lyrical content,,,,,,4.oo brett lemos myspace.com/brettlemos numberonemusic.com/brettlemos

I'm loving it in a creepy im gonna stalk you way and the keys are amazing love it guys keep it up and tell me when you tour in the states

cool sound!it's nearly professional, the refrain is it. but this "one, two, three..." and the mixture from Pop and the guitars is not always together.Great potential!! It could be a hit, so overwork it, for the masses everything has to be perfect.nice wicked part before the end.

cool sound!it's nearly professional, the refrain is it. but this "one, two, three..." and the mixture from Pop and the guitars is not always together.Great potential!! It could be a hit, so overwork it, for the masses everything has to be perfect.nice wicked part before the end.

cool sound!it's nearly professional, the refrain is it. but this "one, two, three..." and the mixture from Pop and the guitars is not always together.Great potential!! It could be a hit, so overwork it, for the masses everything has to be perfect.nice wicked part before the end.

cool sound!it's nearly professional, the refrain is it. but this "one, two, three..." and the mixture from Pop and the guitars is not always together.Great potential!! It could be a hit, so overwork it, for the masses everything has to be perfect.nice wicked part before the end.

cool sound!it's nearly professional, the refrain is it. but this "one, two, three..." and the mixture from Pop and the guitars is not always together.Great potential!! It could be a hit, so overwork it, for the masses everything has to be perfect.nice wicked part before the end.

I like your track a lot, it has a lot of elements/layers. Some synth-melodies don't really seem to fit though, mostly in the bridge. Other than that I think this track should be on the radio, I'm certain that the dutch market will love it! This track makes me curious to your other stuff, oh and I like your name as well :))