there are somthing going onthe vocal is okay means good and bad but it can be corrected the good news is that you made a good tune for a rock audience and if you get your act together and made a good product "CD" MP3 my advice is spend more money and time on your project i give 3.5 for the tune not the performance
Song reviewOn a scale of 5: 1 - Off track 2 - Falling Behind 3 - Right on Track 4 - Moving Ahead 5 - Leading the way I give this song an overall score of 3. The intro was a little slow. I was tempted to skip or turn it off. However, I stuck it out and it was actually kind of catchy. I think the musicianship is lacking in technical skill. The instruments and vocals sound a little amateur. If the track were cleaned up a little bit, perhaps with better recording quality and musicianship I would be willing to give this song an overall rating of 4.