intro way to long the beat is alright sounds like you need to redo this beat and make a few changes then it should sound much better.

First shorten the intro to about 15 or 20 seconds I honestly got bored waiting for the beat to come in. And as the track continued it begins to get a little annoying. I get the feel you were trying to maintain a sense of complexity but in reality ended up killing the final product. My suggestion is to go back and edit until its as simple as possible but also is able to maintain the energy in the environment in which it is being presented to.

ONE WORD. INTRO TO LONG. WHEN YOU SUBMIT YOUR SONG TO A RECORD COMPANY/PRODUCER ETC. YOU MIGHT GET 30 SECONDS TO HOLD THEIR ATTN. I AS A PRODUCER MY SELF NEVER MADE IT PAST THE FIRST 30 SECONDS OF YOUR SONG. REMIX AND TRY AGAIN.

I think the drum intro is a little too long. I would cut the part before the other instruments come in by a couple of measures. (Just my taste, though). I like the instrumental track. A lot of repetition, though. I'd like to hear a little more diversity in the instrumentation.