Stephanie Stevie Williams
Christian / Christian/Gospel
This might not be the BEST review I've written so far, but for the first time I'm giving 5.0 rate. T... more This might not be the BEST review I've written so far, but for the first time I'm giving 5.0 rate. This song is great, old school rock with feeling. The instruments are not at their best quality, but I can live with that. The vocal is the best. Like I'm listening to Ozzy Osborene's new song but from the old stuff. Amazing. That reminds me... you may reconsider the genres you wrote for that song, I think. It's finishing a little but sudden, but I can live with that too. I wish you good luck and keep rockin', you are good. I wish to see you on stage one day. Cheers,
Being a huge fan of Neil Young, I immediately liked this song; especially the 12 string. I kept wait... more Being a huge fan of Neil Young, I immediately liked this song; especially the 12 string. I kept waiting for the bridge, which finally appeared after the song was half over, and then I thought, "This song needs a strong chorus, like female backing singers doing a counter point with "I can breathe again." Another suggestion I will make is to double your lead vocal; not note for note, but as a conversation between 2 of YOU. The chorus could actually answer back to your lead vocal throughout. I think this will flesh the song out and make it much bigger and fuller. I hope this helps. I really do like what you are doing!