Debra D' Lane Music
Country / Country Pop
Hi Dana, What a great country voice.Nice melodic song with a soaring bridge. Loved the tight harmoni... more Hi Dana, What a great country voice.Nice melodic song with a soaring bridge. Loved the tight harmonies. This is a well put together song, lyrically strong and great backing. Really well done and a recording to be proud of.
I really like the song. As far as a critique, I must be honest. I would suggest a bit more on produc... more I really like the song. As far as a critique, I must be honest. I would suggest a bit more on production. The instrumental is on loop, but I could really hear more in the music to match your voice than what is displayed in this song. More chord progressions to match the different range inflections because your voice is beautiful and soft and the accompanying music should warrant that as well. In the recording of the song, understand you mixing strategy to gain a clearer and more sonic sound. We want to hear the words clearly. I like the lyrics, but I had a bit of a time understanding some of the words due to lack of vocal clarity. I'd strongly suggest focusing on the post production a bit more, especially if this is a home recording. Overall good job on the song, and I hope that you continue to focus on your art. It is indeed very special.