Definitely has potential love da beat the flow was smooth i can't say its a hit but its definitely a song for da car ride keep doin ya thang .Not sure wea u from but u got bib of a west coast type vibe. U can follow me on Twitter and instragram @sluggdadonbmg

This sounds like something on the old DJ Screw tapes. Laid back flow, I hear a little bit of distortion in the vocals but other than that your flow would sound really good on a slower production.

The intro, I'd get rid of it. The beat is really catchy it's laid-back beat I can see myself jamming to it. The lyrics on the other hand, are very Elementary. They need a lot of work there's no substance to the lyrics I get what you're saying but to throw a cuss word in because you can't find a adjective or adverb to go with it doesn't make the song Good. That's just my honest opinion.

You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits!

First of all the beat is hot and the intro is very invitational. The hook is catchy and nice, and the lyrics are pretty good. Overall I see greatness in this song. It has potential to top the charts. Keep it up!

Your music is great and is deep keep it up and you'll be going places you never really thought you would be going and i dont think it will take you anytime at all because the music/product speaks for itself so all you really need to do is stay focused and consistent and all that you strive for will come ten fold in no time but i really dig the tracks so ill appreciate it if you keep me posted for any future songs/videos you put out but all in all man keep it up and im liking what im hearing

Your shit straight nice beat and you came on that bih smooth I fuck with it when u finna drop another song where you from cause I see that you are putting on for your city do you go got other songs on here or on SoundCloud or YouTube

This song is different it's not something I would usually listen to but if you throw order the whip take a little ride and bump it it's adult truck keep on making this music and keep on pushin it's all in the mixing and mastering also I know a lot of songs artmaster yet I have some myself up that I haven't sent for mastering or put the Master Tracks up anyway but good job keep on pushin

After listening to the track a few times, I has a few things I did like. The music is right! The beat goes hard. Now the rhymes...? You sound like you smoking weed bro. You too laid back. Turn up a lil bit. I like the concept. It's just hard to understand your words.

can fuck with this my guy, you have a cool style bruh bruh, its different and dont sound like other people shit having your own style is a plus thats is how you win the game, the song has a concept so that's a win! The Hook and verses are on point as well, the only thing I could criticize getting the song mastered to bring the song out more , but other than that I say you did your thing on it, we need to link up, I'm from Memphis and I Rap and shoot videos

Improve your style & delivery. The song has good lyrics, but your delivery makes the song boring. Also find someone who's going to actually mix your track down correctly so that it sounds clean clear & crisp

Hey what's your email address please? Regardless you'll blow em out the best stuff. Me and my uncle BugleBlack who is number one on N1M here in Los Angeles are working to make a smash hit collaboration with my best BEATS. Jazzhop is the only music that's matters especially when you mix it with different voices from different parts of the U.S.

the song goes it just need more emotion in your voice. You sound like you have the voice for the flow, but you don't sound like your into what your saying. Also the sound quality can use some tuning to even out your vocals and the beat. Other then that it was dope. #Keepgrinding

You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits!

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