A melodic refrain elevates into upper spheres...

Nice melodic refrain, which lifts this song including it's songwriting into upper spheres. Due to a rock song I'm missing a more powerful production. If you could spend more effort in polishing your sounds, mixing and performance, I can see a big potential in this track packed full of good ideas. But first you have to focus on more tightness, and the rest will come soon... I expect a big song writer loaded with many good productions here!
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Fake

So I listened, and I didn't get it. Strange, so I listened again. I don't know what to say. Except I listened for a third time. At this point I laughed to myself because you got me hooked on the song. Thanks. Magic
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Achieving perfection

This is what we all do: trying to proceed to the point of being unbelievably hot and full of affectionate impact. One Side Negative is very close to being nearly perfect: good attitude in song as such, nice arrangement and instrumental performance. Maybe you need some different sound production to make it sound more discernible and to the point. At times I have the impression there too many musical parts at play putting the overall song idea sort of behind. Definitely you need to unload a bit the whole ambience of sound in order to relieve it in a way. To top it off you might need to somewhat modify the vocal approach as well, but this is strictly personal. I like your singing, if only it should done with more emotion to deliver. Diese Dinger... so to speak

Hi

I'm not sure what are You trying to do...You ask for review.. if I be You I will use just Music without Vocal..some parts in arrangement are ok.. but vocal is not ok..You need to found a better Singer.. see Rock or Hard Rong also need to be Sung in Tune so I think it will be ok to play just instrumental version on the concerts but as a Total Package I do not think Radio Stations will play it.. They need a Great Song.. Super Recording Quality as a Music Publishers goes They will pass on it...again.. Try to record an Instrumental version.. Good Luck with it..

Cavalier Review

Cavalier Review  Cavalier Review  We liked this song, its always nice to hear this type of song. How was this recorded was it a live take or studio. When we hear this song it reminds us of our tour of Asia. Taking in countries like Thailand, Cambodia,Laos and China.

Some good ideas..

With that being said, if it were my song I would go back and re-evaluate the parts that made sense then simplify them to make it all work. The timing in the vocals are off as well. I think there maybe too much going on and it’s a little confusing as well. Like I said there are some good parts but I would go back and fine tune the good parts and eliminate the parts that don’t make sense. Just a little corrective criticism my friend but like I said this song could have some good potential. Check your intonation on the vocals and whistling too- they may be a little flat, pitch wise. When fixed, this could be a real catchy tune. Good luck my friend!!

Fake It Till You Make It

The music here is interesting... But when the vocals come in - they're really rough - and not necessarily in a good way. The music production on its own, I get. The singing - just really is a distraction. Perhaps the style or genre you're attempting to achieve. If so, you've done a brilliant job! If not, the blending and over singing does not help your song stand out as a song. Going for punk may be exactly what you want!

hi !

I'm not here for reviews so just bravo to do something by yourself. I can only encourage all those who are creators of happiness. And you're one of those people like us ! Good job and really nice ! keep going !!!!! I'm not here for reviews so just bravo to do something by yourself. I can only encourage all those who are creators of happiness. And you're one of those people like us ! Good job and really nice ! keep going !!!!!

good try

interesting idea, but some things need to be improved from my point of view. Correct singing by pitching notes correctly would be a good start. Drums too low in level comparing to other instruments. Guitar part little bit out of groove. Also guitar solo need to be rhythmicaly corrected. Sorry for a long list of claims, but may be it will help you to make another look on what you be doing. Good luck!

Differant

I like different. Thing's are really just beginning to get better these days Because different makes a difference . Sang have to say just a couple more famous than before words. Well past 150. Lol Lol

FAKE

OK WELL THERE IS POTENTIAL IN EVERY SONG THE PRODUCTION HERE JUST NEEDS TO BE EQUALISED OUT SO ALL SOUNDS IN THE MIX ARE RELATIVE TO EACH OTHER FOR STARTERS VOCALS NEED TO BE CLEAR AND AUDIBLE ABOVE THE MAIN DRIVING RYHTM INSTRUMENTS IN THIS CASE THE GUITARS WHICH IN A PUNK TRACK CAN HAVE THAT ROUGH TONE TRY TO CFEATE NATURAL SPACE WITHIN THE SONG WITHOUT HAVING SOUNDS INCLUDED FIGHTING TO BE HEARD PROPERLY IN THE OVERALL MIX RE WORK THE SONG WITH A GOOD PRODUCER AND STRIP OUT THE UNNECCESARY PARTS AND FEATURE WHAT WORKS
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